Tino pai Princeton. Thanks for entering your poem. I like the way we can see the words on the screen but you also read it out for us. Should your last line have an s on the end of earthquake? What inspired you to write about earthquakes?
Hi Princeton, My name is Katelyn from Paroa School and my teacher has sent my class and I yours and others link to poems people have made. I choose yours because I have been in a earthquake before in Kaikoura. Have you ever been in a earthquake? If yes, How big was it. I am pretty sure that the kiakoura one was 7.8 but I can't remember. Maybe next time you could write a caption saying what you enjoyed, What you found difficult and what you could have done better next time. Keep up the good work! BYE! From Katelyn
Tino pai Princeton. Thanks for entering your poem. I like the way we can see the words on the screen but you also read it out for us. Should your last line have an s on the end of earthquake? What inspired you to write about earthquakes?
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Katelyn from Paroa School and my teacher has sent my class and I yours and others link to poems people have made. I choose yours because I have been in a earthquake before in Kaikoura. Have you ever been in a earthquake? If yes, How big was it. I am pretty sure that the kiakoura one was 7.8 but I can't remember. Maybe next time you could write a caption saying what you enjoyed, What you found difficult and what you could have done better next time.
Keep up the good work!
BYE!
From Katelyn
very cool
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Jesse And I think you should get some more words not just a few words but good on you I still think this a good poem
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